Writing Check

LI: To edit and check a piece of recount writing

This week on Thursday I have been working on my Writing for the Must Do Task List.

As you can see I have made recount about kiwi sport as told to by Mr O and the rest of the people in my class. After we sortied out our recount we had to check our work and see if we have R1, R2, R3, R4, R5, R6 and R7 for Ideas, Structure Language, Organisation, Vocabulary, Punctuation and Spelling.  The score I got was 29.

The Kiwi Sport

Today LS1 Group B went to kiwisport, at kiwi sport we were having challenges and were having fun. At kiwi sport we were learning how to play badminton which was hard for quite some of us. As I walked in the hall the excitement of my feeling bursted. Although we had fun we also learnt some new moves with a racket while hitting a shuttle. The moves LS1 learnt was under leg, ForeHand, BackHand.

After the moves we learnt, we had challenge which had 2 rounds for 2 winners. The challenge was that you have to bounce your shuttle and try not to drop your shuttle. If you are the last person standing then you are the winner. Now the second round is the same but if a different person wins then both of the winner of each round have to face each other. The winner for the game was Julian the other winner who lost to Julian was Jonathan.

Soon enough the second challenge we played was called 10 and over. For this game you had to bounce your shuttle 10 times and  over in a row. If you drop your shuttle then you have to start back to 0 which is a tiring thing to do. There was no winner because this game was all about having fun and enjoying time that the kiwi sport teacher give us.

Soon after later we had another challenge which we had to juggle the shuttle, but this time you have to use your back hand only which was a struggle for some people in this class. Luckily for me I got help so that I don’t fail as much as the class did.

At Kiwi Sport the safety rules were that you can’t swing your racket around people or anywhere. If you dribble your shuttle and you are getting close to someone you have to stop. Another rule is you can’t use your racket as a guitar, sword or smacking on the ground. The last rule is that you can’t bounce your shuttle high or smack your shuttle hard.

After a lot of time ahead of us we had a rest for about 4 minutes and we had to remember those things that the kiwisport people taught us and answer their questions. As the kiwisport finished I learnt there is a forehand, backhand, under leg and a lot of other moves .