Evaluation of my Animated Story

In the context of in the neighbourhood I will design and produce an animated story for Panmure Bridge Students ( age 5 to 13) The purpose of my animated story is to inspire people to stop littering and what they can cause for being responsible for it. My animated story was not able to relate to the topic of littering.

My animated story is still currently under construction.
May you please help me by giving me feedback on my conceptual design of my animated story.

Casey and Jeff/ Animated Story Example

This is an example of an animated story that i recreated from a progam called stratch. As we were using the progam stratch it was diffiucult  to use coding. The compoents used to create this story includes: Speech bubles, Characters, Backdrops, Coding, Effects. This animated story was also incompleted but was purposely posted for a example of how a Animated story works using stratch. The codes I used to recreate the story include: Event,  Looks, Green Flag, Red Flag, Script. The looks script to enable the sprites to talk,  Events script to start the story, Control script to enable a pause bewtween a Character or to repeat a word a Characters said. I enjoyed using stratch, as I learnt how to code.

DigiTech

This week for Tech, we were using a program called scratch. Scratch is a something I had difficulties with as it was my first time using it. I learnt that when you use scratch, you can make animation and you can make simple games. If we needed help, we could go on Mrs Anderson DLO about Scratch and get help if needed. Mrs Anderson also demonstrated us with tools to make simple animations or short clips.