Should animals be in public
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Introduction
State what you are arguing about
State your opinion
For or Against
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I am against letting animals in public because they can hurt other people
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Reason 1
Kill
Supportive details
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I am against letting animals in public because they can hurt native birds and thrush that makes us think of home. They can hurt other animals and kill each other. They can hurt people and babies and kids. A snake could of poisons somebody. An elephant can crush somebody. And a tiger and lion can bite people head off that why it bad to leave animals in public
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Reason 2
Destroyer
Supportive details
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If we don’t let the animals where they belong to they can make our world a mess. They can tear people's home and make shops a mess. They can bust down our houses and the builders would have a long time building it. The animals can take down buildings and special buildings. They can take over our world with animals and other things. They rehound our dream by crushing games becoming famous becoming youtuber a nurse a police and having phones and ipad
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Reason 3
Supportive details
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If animals wouldn’t be in public it would be peace full without them. It wouldn't be nasty if animals we're not in public. It would better without animals but cats and nice dogs would be better in public.
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Conclusion
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So what i'm saying if animals was in public we would be in trouble.
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I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teacher is Mrs Anderson.
Thursday, 26 November 2015
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