Thinking Group Term 4

This is my thinking group term 4. We had to answer all the 12 days of christmas together.

Room 7's overall flag votes

This is the Final vote the normal flag has the most it has 15. The littlest amount is the FurnWhite,Red,Blue. It had 7 chooser. The Original flag is the winner in our class because there were 15 chooser in the original flag vote. In the lowest amount has 7 they don't like it because is not better than the original.

Room 7's Favourite Flag New Zealand Flag Design

The lowest Amount of chooser in the flag vote was the Red Peak I think that this is the lowest amount of chooser is because they don't like the design. The Highest flag Chooser was Silver Therm White Red and Blue this is the highest flag chooser because people like this design. The Second Highest was the Black white flag some chose this one flag because it is important to choose other flags.

Xtramath Result

This my xtramath it just did one question but don't know why. 

Revisiting Writing

Instructions

Read over this piece of writing. Change it so that it makes sense and so it sounds exciting. You can delete sentences and change words in the writing so that it can be enhanced. Try not to take the meaning away from the writing.

On Saturday I was at my Papa's, and Aunts, and Uncles, house getting ready for halloween. When I saw my papa was dressed  up in a spooky zombie I was dressed up as a purple bat.  I was ready for halloween. Me and my Papa were going around the houses asking for lollies .

Once I went to a house that was very black and very spooky my Papa got scared I told him don’t worry It's just a house  full of dickarayshions . There  Were  spiderwebs and bats and witch dickarayshions I knocked on the door and out came a ghost a man and a lady gave us sweets yummy happy trical treat I said to them next I went down to another house that wasn't spooky as it was

It only had spiders and black a black witch’s  broom I knocked on the door and out came a black witch the lady gave us chocolate and chocolate candy pumpkins .

When we stopped at kings road we saw my friend Zara and her Dad Babu they were going trical treating for yummy treats me and my Papa were walking to Zara we asked could we come with you to get yummy treats they said yes When we stopped down at the cafe we had a hot chocolate and a strawberry cupcake Than we went back down to costs cress  to go to other houses for trick or treating  

When we saw another house that was even scarier I said happy trinkil treat and out came a spider the man gave us lollies  and chocolate it was fun at halloween. than it was time to go home I said bye to my friend Zara and went home to eat all the goodies .   

My Edited Piece of Writing

On Saturday I was at my Papa's, and Aunts, and Uncles, house getting ready for halloween. When I saw my papa was dressed  up in a spooky zombie I was dressed up as a purple bat.  I was ready for halloween. Me and my Papa were going around the houses asking for lollies .

Once I went to a house that was very black and very spooky my Papa got scared I told him don’t worry It's just a house  full of dickarayshions . There  Were  spiderwebs and bats and witch dickarayshions I knocked on the door and out came a ghost a man and a lady gave us sweets yummy happy trical treat I said to them next I went down to another house that wasn't spooky as it was

It only had spiders and black a black witch’s  broom I knocked on the door and out came a black witch the lady gave us chocolate and chocolate candy pumpkins .

When we stopped at kings road we saw my friend Zara and her Dad Babu they were going trical treating for yummy treats me and my Papa were walking to Zara we asked could we come with you to get yummy treats they said yes When we stopped down at the cafe we had a hot chocolate and a strawberry cupcake Than we went back down to costs cress  to go to other houses for trick or treating  

When we saw another house that was even scarier I said happy trinkil treat and out came a spider the man gave us lollies  and chocolate it was fun at halloween. than it was time to go home I said bye to my friend Zara and went home to eat all the goodies .   

This my Revisiting writing about Hallaween

Xtramath Result

This my xtramath result with 9 wrong some white and a lot right.